Subtitles for

تقدیم به تمام دلاورمردان نیروی دریایی امپراطوری ژاپن که نیروی دریایی روس را به جهنم فرستادند و بذر شادی و امید در دل ملتهای جهان کاشتند

Fixed the obvious problems of spelling, grammar and syntax. Poor use of idiom could usually be determined from context. And there were lots of errors or inconsistencies in translation of military ranks and Russian ship and personnel names. And then there were just the mistakes of words that look similar but mean very different things.