Full dialogue! Max characters per line about 51, max two lines per line number, spell checked, no overlaps. Used colloquial spelling where colloquial speech used. My punctuation and choice of lower case or upper case, etc etc. Thought about translating the Hawaiian and the psuedo-Hawaiian, gave up at "wiki wiki" "hele hele", "Tabu! Pau" Also, they have the volvano god, Pele as a MALE, but it's a SHE...Madame Pele! Enjoy!
Full dialogue! Max characters per line about 51, max two lines per line number, spell checked, no overlaps. Used colloquial spelling where colloquial speech used. My punctuation and choice of lower case or upper case, etc etc. Thought about translating the Hawaiian and the psuedo-Hawaiian, gave up at "wiki wiki" "hele hele", "Tabu! Pau" Also, they have the volvano god, Pele as a MALE, but it's a SHE...Madame Pele! Enjoy!